Wednesday, January 28, 2009

For my topic proposal I choose the subject on way the main reason people laugh is when they are surprised. I agree because according to many sources of text people are proven to laugh when something happens out of the ordinary. People don’t expect anything out of the ordinary to happen so when something does occur that is not normal their first reaction is to laugh. I want to support this idea of the main reason people do laugh is because they are surprised. There are many different types of evidence presented to support this theory. Some examples of evidence include going back to the primitive ages, your first laugh as a baby, and a scientific study. The evidence begins with talking about the generally accepted notion of evolutionary expansion the evidence is then supported with an example story. The next evidence presented is with a story of when you were first a child and you had your first laugh. Another piece of evidence describes an experiment performed on brain patterns. The final evidence given talks about the classic joke structure which makes people laugh. The author presents himself as trustworthy by supporting his evidence and his argument with examples of why people would laugh in certain situations. The writer also gave evidence not only by describing scenarios but by also proving scientifically the main reason people laugh. By having these explanations supported by all this evidence it is clear why the reason people do laugh is because they are surprised.

2 comments:

  1. Evidence seems clear and proposal is well planned out. I like the transition through years as one's views on comedy and jokes begin to structure into their sense of humor.

    I don't know if you plan on using this piece or not, but Hemley (pages 50-62 in the Laughing Matters book) has various examples of this and he even incorporated a section devoted to surprise. A possible quotation could be "we laugh because we have been shaken out of our normal perceptions" (60).

    I think the track that you are on is efficient and you will be able to produce a well developed essay.

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  2. Toward the middle of this proposal, you start discussing the evidence that is provided by the writer. Focus on this and develop it more. Why does the evidence work? What kind of evidence is it? Why would the intended audience of this piece find this evidence effective?

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